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Poem Number 8921
He's on the inside looking out
shes on the outside doing without
d.t., your words' ambiguity
may or may not face immunity
hope you've learned of love's purity.
reasoned with loves obscurity
to find again in unity.
perfection love eternity



With Communication,...as the,.....Key


Commentary:
is there something wrong with me participating on this page.
are people giving me ill will and i'm not getting it,, whats up....?
.d.t (danny thomas)
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zero ill will.
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Has Every One Flipped?
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or has everyone flipped out
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Guess I don't fully understand this one, seems to be a personal message, then maybe I'm missing something. "Sadness"
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respecting the poem's beauty,..last line, an ambiguity, looks like someone with a den of lions key.
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