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Poem Number 8890
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I just would truly like to thank whoever it was that closed my LITTLE BOYS AND LITTLE GIRLS poems...the last part wasn't mine. thank you..m.e.
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no offense to you m.e., but when i read it i think the author was trying to make an enlightened point about todays society that children shouldn't be boxed into sexual roles, they should be allowed to find their own idenity. if it crosses the sexual lines, so be it. everyone should be accepted for who they are not what. they should have written it their own poem though i agree, free of yours, still i think they made a good point.
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Just about everything was closed, mysteriously, what else is new. I know of a few reasons why they were closed. To repost everything when its still viewable would be strange also at this point. Not interested in all the mayhem.
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What? I don't understand the commentator's interpretation of the additions to the poem. I didn't see any such thing.
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I read it again ,.. obviously it was written by someone with a questionable agenda. At the time, the comments about the poem didn't make much more sense to me than that someone was abasing adulthood for the fact that it's adulthood, so I responded to the anger in the line after the stanza's last line. Now I see that anger wasn't the real offender. - Crazy day, and I'm glad it's over.
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well we all write our poems and more than not we finish with a thought that is our own, unless it's an open poem to be added to. The last stanza that was added would be fine in the comments.. added the way it was made it look like I authored it...and it simply didn't fit . And sometimes a poem is just a poem... oh well....m.e.
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