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Poem Number 7645
you don't want to hear my voice anymore
or see me dance a dance into the fire
you dont walk with me, you don't waltz with me
you think I am a brazen emotionless and empty being
filled with sleeping dreams and lies
wingless, I've lost my ability to fly
so let me shatter on the concrete
like a crystal . . .an empty glass tumbler
that only sings when you run your finger around the rim
and you don't want to hear my voice anymore
so just let me be
all options over, I am free
Commentary:
lil ++ Fascinating and haunting poem. ++ Abe
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lil - "only sings when you run your finger around the rim" - that's a haiku line, the best there is - allan
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