oops! must have been accidentally closed!
---pen

ten years
and still
i want to
lick you
bite you
wrap my
legs around
the hips
that poured
our children into me
passionate nights
on beds
and floors
rushed
needful nights
we couldn't
touch enough
and even now
even now
i blush
when you
tell me
that you wanna
well you know
and then
you show me
and i laugh
knowing
we are always
gonna be
alright
Commentary:
Happy anniver penny..and why not.. I love the poem..jake
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goes beyond love pen...thats how it is...love the poem...and you :) -rr
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Avante-garde!!!! (but ok)
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I agree. You should always guard your avante; preferably with a chastity belt. _- Jethro
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Great piece - if only more people in the world could feel such emotions (even after half the time). - SHE
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i love the honest & playful emotions!!!! Drm
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Happy Anniversary Pen ~ very very sexy poem..you and your husband are very fortunate, love is grand. ml
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Love is grand but it's made up of a lot more than a roll.This is a well written "piece".
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so sad if it offended you, anon, but do me a favor and show me the same respect everyone else has been demanding so loudly... i'll close my own poem in good time. i believe our fellow poets have demanded at least 24 to 48 hours. if you feel the need to shorten the page, please start from the top where the poems have been here longer. (btw...quite aware of what love entails, and in marriage, passion is a part of it as well. don't knock it, just because you lack it. -pen
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ml!! it's wonderful to see you again! and yes, love IS grand, even after a decade of daily wear and two kids! :)))))) -pen
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It's the daily wear that makes love grow. Belated happy anniversary.Don't pay attention to narrow minds. Good to see you here again. J.:))
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If this is real, ten years is nothing to sneeze about! Congratulations on this milestone (and accomplishment). more folks should be so blessed with a happy marriage that still has some spice to it. Louise F. in Illinois
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it's real, louise...thanks! -pen