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Poem Number 7532
Violence and Destruction
---Anonymous
the twin offspring of war,
---Anonymous
conceived in hate,
---Anonymous
and the greed of lust,
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brought forth by
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that bloody midwife, Mars,
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birthed on battlefields,
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and suckled on blood.
---JFC
Commentary:
Fresh, poetic view of war and violence. = Chuck
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Good work JFC. A little editing wouldn't hurt. Tighten it up.
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Good point. Thanks. JFC
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