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Poem Number 7532
Violence and Destruction
the twin offspring of war,
conceived in hate,
and the greed of lust,
brought forth by
that bloody midwife, Mars,
birthed on battlefields,
and suckled on blood.
Commentary:
Fresh, poetic view of war and violence. = Chuck
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Good work JFC. A little editing wouldn't hurt. Tighten it up.
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Good point. Thanks. JFC
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