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Poem Number 7018
Spring #27
Commentary:
Lay down beside me.
Iım static with longing.
My sadness dances upon a
leaf with fairy likeness,
while misfortune
drifts upon thee.
But see,
entwined like hands of envy,
swans
telling
of tomorrow.
In the gloom of winterıs edge,
see tales of truth tomorrow.
So risk my memories !
Fling them outward,
like spent leaves.
Cast the winter at me,
till emotion swirls.
Call it contemplation.
drifts upon thee.
But see,
entwined like hands of envy,
swans telling of tomorrow.
In the gloom of winterıs edge,
see tales of truth tomorrow,
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Lay down beside me.
Iım static with longing.
My sadness dances upon a
leaf with fairy likeness,
while misfortune
drifts upon thee.
But see,
entwined like hands of envy,
swans
telling
of tomorrow.
In the gloom of winterıs edge,
see tales of truth tomorrow.
So risk my memories !
Fling them outward,
like spent leaves.
Cast the winter at me,
till emotion swirls.
Call it contemplation.
drifts upon thee.
But see,
entwined like hands of envy,
swans telling of tomorrow.
In the gloom of winterıs edge,
see tales of truth tomorrow,
-------
Lay down beside me,
with sincerity.Iım
static with longing.
My sadness dances upon
a leaf with fairy likeness,
while misfortune drifts upon
thee.
But see,
entwined like hands of envy,
swans telling of tomorrow.
In the gloom of winterıs edge,
there are tales of truth
tomorrow.
So risk my memories!
Fling them outward,
like spent leaves.
Cast the winter at me,
til emotion swirls.
Call it contemplation.
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My congradulations to the author of this. You are truely talented for all it's length and purpose. T.O
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Daniel, were you here?
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