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Poem Number 6928
A simple request
by YouKnowWho
leave my door open tonight


Commentary:

I cant remember where I put
my face
ripped off in our tumble across the floor
revealing more than I intended in the
murkey morning light
Conniving man
you seem to require mybody
My nerves muscles fibers corpuscles
are yours to take but lover and confidant
my vocal cords my tongue
(the sweet way I use it)
my ring finger
(and what it represents)
will not be given away.

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I cant remember where I put..............
..................................my face
ripped off in our tumble across the floor
revealing more than I...intended...in the
murkey morning light.....................
............................Conniving man
you seem to.........require........mybody
My nerves...muscles...fibers...corpuscles
are yours to take but lover and confidant
my vocal cords..........my tongue........
.................(the sweet way I use it)
..........my...ring...finger.............
(and what it represents).................
.........................................will not be given away.

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you know who- good poem and the voice is oh so familiar!!lol But I won't give it away. J.)
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