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Poem Number 6927
Is it better to stop running,
Or to turn around?
When I turn around people will see my tear stained face
Commentary:
Is there more? Good start! Of course we must turn around at some point because we can't keep running! MM
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Tyger ++ Great starting thought (3 lines so far). Good potential for very nice poem. -- Bud
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Seems to me that this is a complete poem. As is often the case with good poems, it is open-ended, allowing the reader to form individual, mental images, personalized closure. I like it just the way it is! :) -AF
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Running from things only prolongs things longer. The sooner you turn around the sooner it is over. I agree this poem is at end it helps the reader come up with their own conclusin.:)))) Little Eyes
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