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Poem Number 5751
How can I be angry
Even though I should
I hear your "breathe"
and I can't break my love
Twisted, bent
Welded metal
It won't rust
Turn to dust
Crushed, warped
But still alive
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Commentary:
Chris~~ It is so expressive! It's like actually watching you from the ring-side, wrestling with your "demons"!
Is it the same as your others? Perish the thought!~~Ed
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I know a guy who loves to weild and work with metal and tools. This sounds very much like his way of saying,"I love you". Nicely written Chris. amber
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I really like this! No matter what love goes through, true love always survives...rana
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Very true, rana. Very true. Fapral
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