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Poem Number 4561
The sun rises as dark as the night
No harolding light of the new day
That which was Heaven Is now Hell
Power, once wielded, now turns to self loathing
Dreams realised turn into shattered nightmare slivers
Commentary:
J, Do you think people who use other names for their work aren't proud of it?
Fapral
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Fapral,sometimes people use other names because they aren't sure of their work or just stay anon. but once in a while I feel the need to just stay back and have a different space for a while. I usually sign now . I think I had trouble expressing deep feelings--sort of inhibited. Always a very private person. The shell is being chipped away, but yes, we use anon. or other names from lack of confidence once in a while.J:^))
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Do you ever feel better noe that your out in the open? Fapral
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Yes, Fapral--more honest but I backslide once in a while.lolJ:))
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Fapral-- I have had these two lines drifting about in my head with nothing to attatch them to, so I thank you for your prelude to my thoughts. --B
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Good job, B I like it!! Fapral
I have to admit J I too back slide once in a while. Fapral
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it's fun to backslide once in a while ........ Drm
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Hi Fapral (trying to guess who you are:))...I travel with a fake moustache and sunglasses at times...not because I wam afraid or any more or less 'proud' of what I write...but because it is a nice little jolt to the system, stirs things up for me to not be "me" for a while. makes no sense, but it works for me!! -pen
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