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Poem Number 4475
Where am i
---allan
it's huge
---Anonymous
Darkness surounds me
---Fapral
unspoken.
---clare
much too big for my eyes
---cla
maybe they are
---cla
broken.
---cla


Commentary:
Where am i when i'm hurting
when sighs pull up buckets of pain
and reason fights chaos in vain
where am i then ?
.
Where am i when i'm crying
when dams are breaking in my soul
frustration floods my grasp and hold
where am i then ?
.
Where am i when i'm loving
when heart blooms, rockets and baloons
lands on the far side of your moons
where am i then ?
.
Where am i when i'm laughing
when thoughts short circuit in my brain
and sparks cascade like pouring rain
where am i then ?
.
Where am i when not hurting
not crying, loving, laughing too
but seing clearly, i'll tell you :
no past, nor future, hence no now
but i am, anyhow ::)
- me too
-------
hiya allan!
had a bit of fun with your line above.
same place all the time
stuff in head, gluey in brain-
such proud amoebas!
take care
clare :~))
-------
hiya clare !
i recognize that place too, went there recently
but was kicked out by the abx boot
-- allan
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