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Poem Number 4018
sky full of pockets
of grey cloud. pink silk lining
pocket full of sky.


Commentary:
this is one of those 'killer images' mark.. Now how can i look at the sky in the future, and not see pockets everywhere !! (the empty view of sky in my pocket is quite familiar, tho') - allan
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this is quite beautiful. . .the image seems very cool, very relaxing. I love looking up at the sky, especially in the morning, to see what sunlight colors filter through the clouds. This is probably one of my favorite haikus written on this page:)
~Lil
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lil, allan, thank you both. Inspired by something clare said, and by
allan's 'walk in the forest' poem the other day. mark : ))
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