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Poem Number 4017
You can sleep on the edge of the Kalahari,
on the rim of a volcano,
in a life-raft on the sea,
but never in my arms.
Commentary:
welll... i donno mark - sounds like a rough place to spend the night - allan (lol)
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I can only agree ... I know the Kalahari ... "that is where nothing grows so high, and on top of that it has the cheek to flower" ... actually when it rains in the Kalahari it turns into a great bed of blossoms ... it must be seen to be appreciated ... Daniel
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daniel, I would dearly love to see that. mark
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