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Poem Number 3995
boys and girls
eat love like candy
delicious, pink
heaving handfuls
to their frantic mouths
seeking out the tender bites
that ache most to be tasted
bare limbed and weak
never satisifed
they lie back, each intoxicated
by the other's beauty
Commentary:
Pen, I see what you mean ... this magnetic poetry is addictive ... I love it:) Daniel
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Shouldn't you be off to the candy store?:)) Great poem ... Daniel
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I'm taking advantage of my insomnia! but if I don't sleep soon, this will get the better of me! -pen:)
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