your hands
may tell your work
but your eyes say everthing
when you see your common brother
you know

Is it just me or does anyone else sometime see someone and know without speaking a word that you and that person could be wonderful lovers,friends...and if so, what is that?............jake
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Nope jake,it isn't just you. There's an ethereal chemistry or the eyes betray a common spirit.Happened to me a few years ago and we became very good friends and are alike as two peas in a pod.Never met before and found out her father's family and my Dad's family are probably related.We both live far away from our roots. Strange.J:))
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thanks J ethereal chemistry..betray a common spirit..I like that..man I thought maybe there is something to astrology .......naa.........jake
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oh BTW J ..thanks again there are at least two of us I thought maybe I came from planet X of something........jake
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jake, I know exactly what you mean, some bond of the spirit that transcends the typical modes of communication...pen:)
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then there are three..I am not alone....no one wants to be alone..Jake
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ahh Jake - all the time. Count me in.- allan
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Plus comment: this poem "speaks" to people as evidenced by the numerous comments! Minus: technical errors and could use improved wording and/or phrases. Otherwise...good job! .....The Poetry Professor
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cinquain king Jake!
like this, clare :~))