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Poem Number 3844
sleeping
with you, my arm
draped over your hip, I
pull in closer to continue
this dream
Commentary:
Beautiful, sleepy cinquain pen, they are so enticing aren't they :) ... I'm listening to Serge Rachmaninoff: Piano Concerto No 3, 1st Mov with Orchestra... I love the double melodies ... this is really beautiful music ... it's like a dream ... it has so much happening in it all at once:)) Daniel
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lovelymusic you are listening to, daniel...alas, I am off to work. Have a wonderful day! -pen
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so warm and cosy. lovely, pen. mark : ))
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thank you mark, it was a lovely dream -pen::)
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it creates a beautiful scene in my head...~Starr
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