carrier pigeon
take this note with my message
share it with my friends
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and when you've travelled
across distant shores and lands
come back home to me
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please make sure they read
the part which says, "I love them"
sending love on wings
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Haiku#3, Line#2: which=that - I normally prefer 'that' to 'which', 'which' is too passive.

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Daniel, this is beautiful "..love on wings.."
thank you for your message.
perhaps the grey pigeon would like such a job.
If we were all birds, we could fly to a rocky island
and all twitter together.(poem in there somwhere..)
take care, clare :~)))

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Thank you Clare ... Your poetic comments are lovely, and yes, there is a poem in there :) Daniel