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Poem Number 3764
every day, reborn
---allan
from the shallow death of sleep
---allan
today - my birthday !
---allan
...
---Anonymous
slow alpha rhythm
---Daniel
vagabond of my senses
---Daniel
newly created
---Daniel
...
---Anonymous
this REM sleep cycle
---Daniel
a paradoxical sleep
---Daniel
where phantoms do dwell
---Daniel
...
---Anonymous
repose of my soul
---Daniel
where hypocrites don't exist
---Daniel
prisoner's release
---Daniel
...
---Anonymous
ambivalent poor
---Daniel
awakened to poverty
---Daniel
asleep in his wealth
---Daniel


Commentary:
figuratively speaking - allan (symbolic you might say, -lol)
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Haiku#5 - Line #3: "asleep in their wealth"
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REM sleep or paradoxical sleep cycle: This is an interesting stage in the normal sleep cycle during which dreams occur and the body undergoes marked changes including rapid eye movement, loss of reflexes, and increased pulse rate and brain activity.
Daniel

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