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Poem Number 3755
his words carried such pent-up emotions
screaming of ambivalence ....
like multiple arrows shot through the air
hoping one will graze the bull's eye
eschewing the obvious benefits of being deaf and dumb
he spoke the truth in all it muliplicities and confusion
only to harvest the wrath of the "peaceful"


Commentary:
I mus tbe tired, I read line one as peanut emotions. I wonder what kind of emotions that would be. . .
~ Lil
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Lil.. I am sure that is what is says.
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His word carried such peanaut emotions
screaming off the ambulance
Lights mutinous, harrow through the hair
Hop Ping Won's grazed 'bulls eye"
He chewing, oblivious to dead belief, dumb.
He spoke the truth, multiplied by confusion
Only to harvest the wrasse by the pail full

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LOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!!!!!
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yeah that's what I read. . .that must be it. . .symbolism is quite striking!!! :p
~Lil
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I chuckle when you chuckle. gives me reason to live .
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