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Poem Number 3455
Is it foolish to believe
to believe that I can see
beyond myself to some
fundamental truth
uncluttered by the debris
of my egocentric predicament?
Is it true afterall that my lens
bent into another shape cannot see
what your hand holds in front of me
divert the impulse along a path
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The short version? mark : )))))
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p.s. anon, not laughing at you, i've made similar mistakes. mark : )
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I'm typing with a two year old pulling at my
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..... arm:))))))))))) -pen
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