If I loved you under a Proctor and Gamble Moon
---Anonymous
Would it mean any less
---Anonymous
Than if I had never loved you
---Anonymous
At all ?
---Anonymous
Would Mexico been any differernt
---Anonymous
A loving ground
---Anonymous
If you had not been
---Anonymous
A lovely smoking lush ?
---Anonymous
Perhaps our last time
---Anonymous
would not have been our first
---Anonymous
Laura, if i could stand
---Anonymous
Your smell of booze
---Anonymous
You may as well have cut out
---Anonymous
with rusty tin can lids
---Anonymous
My desparate love for you
---Anonymous
Some where your red haired
---Anonymous
Dolphin ways tied my soul and held it under
---Anonymous
Weighted when even sense
---Anonymous
could not say surface.. breathe.. live
---Anonymous
Except die as i might with longing
---Anonymous
when we were apart.. together
---Anonymous
I couldnt stand your drinking
---Anonymous
I would never ever sleep agian
---Anonymous
If i allowed mty self to think
---Anonymous
Of the freckled muscles of your back
---Anonymous
Or the mexican sea sliding off your body
---Anonymous
Ont he bus three hours from town
---Anonymous
I knew we would meet
---Anonymous
Ten minutes after we did
---Anonymous
we were exploring each other
---Anonymous
Under a giant blanket
---Anonymous
Much to Mexico's amusement
---Anonymous
And now Maybe I'd let you
---Anonymous
Get all liquored up
---Anonymous
and stick your tongue up my nose
---Anonymous
When we made love
---Anonymous
I guess I would do almost anything
---Anonymous
If it would make any difference.
---lar
If I could make those first days last
---lar

very nice poem larry...the longing for what was/might have been is palpable. we all have one that sticks out as "it might have worked if only..." -pen
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...although the sicking her tongue up your nose part.....!!!!! -pen
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"red haired / Dolphin ways".. lovely, larry, though I also want to add my
name to pen's second comment! mark
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Trust Me !,,Nobody was more surprised than I was !!! Larry
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this is poetry Larry...........the ole pompous-back yard unfeeling critic......jake the snake
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Oh Larry... great work. -Juliette
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Larry, uh, shamboozling good, that means i loved it, clare ;^)