I two hundred experienced salty tears and a snotty nose
drunk
Mix and 'fuse up words, tears bloom liquid rose
Thunk
and thunk and thunk about you, sky come night blue
All that ever made sense, you.
Our love for each other is in another dimension, salty snot, and an I and a noze.
We're a cubist painting, flat perspective, squashed up close,
splintered mirror, overdose, doze ...
just an old fractured oil painting, power packed with silent noise

L1 should be experienced two hundred salty tears Selrachco
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Selrachco, even like your mistakes. mark, (not K, E) : )
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Thank you mark. Selrachco
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L7 should be "and an I"
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L8 I'm still thinking of that 'seven lips' line from the other day.
Pen was also struck by it. I thought it was very Cubist. mark