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Poem Number 3151
soft shroud wraps the forest
a misty veil this morning
hidden on the forest floor
fairies awaken humming
tunes lift the foggy dew
sunny rays filter through
childish laughter heard
new born baby crying
swollen breasts aglow
mother's milk fluid flow
fairies skipped around
amidst pieces of laughter
awaiting the new born's joy
for to them will be born that child's fairy
Commentary:
Hi Dan! ;) annie
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Hi Annie! I decided to add a Peter Pan twist to your poem ... I hope you like it:)) Daniel
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Dan I love it, its magical !! annie
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A mid-summer night...Mendelssohn..puck...Beautiful restfull..music..touch my eyes to sleep the sleep of a child again..............jake
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have to say...I've been there with those swollen breasts aglow!!...OUCH!!!!:)) -pen
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Greetings jake and pen ... Hope you're having a great day.. Daniel
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;))) annie
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pass me a couple of those strange mushrooms so i can get in the spirit of this thing..lar
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hi Daniel...work around the yard today..tomorrow back to work work..rats rats Jake
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