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Poem Number 2961
The sun you say
is casting long shadows on the earth
Life you say
is causing painfull deaths on the earth
But reality i say
is all pervasive naked darkness and void
in so few corners really, putting on a dress
of miraculously radiating light and love
So yes, keep your focus
on nearby objects
just remember to stop up
for those bare surfaces
revealing the proper perspective
just below that shimmer
dancing infinite emptiness
Commentary:
nothing like a good fist to the head to make you see the light. Thanks! I needed that!
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