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Poem Number 2896
Time like a constant breeze
---allan
wavefront carrying
---allan
universe into existence
---allan
unfolding suns radiating
---allan
floating leaves dancing
---allan
Time like a constant breath
---allan
warmth thawing
---allan
matter into movement
---allan
pushing light flowing
---allan
pulling life growing
---allan
atmosphere of time
---jas
sparkle in the moon lit sky
---dave
primordial spirit of
---paul
poesy's genesis
---paul
timeless constant soul
---jas


Commentary:
beautiful beautiful all..be proud of yourselves..........jake
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this is excellent ... reading this allowed me to see my life flash by... Another inspirational gem from some great minds ... Daniel
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Hi Dan ! Annie ;)
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Hi Annie! It's always nice meeting you here.
As I read the above lines again I was reminded of one of Van's great lyrics. I am going to share them here, as I feel they are quiet fitting for the occasion:
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A Sense of Wonder
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I walked in my greatcoat
Down through the days of the leaves.
No before after, yes after before
We were shining our light into the days of blooming wonder
In the eternal presence, in the presence of the flame.
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Didn't I come to bring you a sense of wonder
Didn't I come to lift your fiery vision bright
Didn't I come to bring you a sense of wonder in the flame.
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On and on and on and on we kept singing our song
Over Newtonards and Comber, Gransha and the
Ballystockart Road.
With Boffyflow and Spike
I said I could describe the leaves for Samuel and Felicity
Rich, red browney, half burnt orange and green.
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Didn't I come to bring you a sense of wonder
Didn't I come to lift your fiery vision bright
Didn't I come to bring you a sense of wonder in the flame.
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It's easy to describe the leaves in the Autumn
And it's oh so easy in the Spring
But down through January and February it's a very different thing.
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On and on and on, through the winter of our discontent.
When the wind blows up the collar and the ears are frostbitten too
I said I could describe the leaves for Samuel and what it means to you and me
You may call my love Sophia, but I call my love Philosophy.
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Didn't I come to bring you a sense of wonder
Didn't I come to lift your fiery vision
Didn't I come to bring you a sense of wonder in the flame.
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Wee Alfie at the
Castle Picturehouse on the Castlereagh Road.
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Whistling on the corner next door where he kept Johnny Mack Brown's horse.
O Solo Mio by McGimsey and the man who played the saw outside the city hall.
Pastie suppers down at Davy's chipper Gravy rings, barnbracks Wagon wheels, snowballs.
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Great! Dan Have missed you Annie;)
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Its 6:00 in the morning here , great way to wake up! Annie
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I haven't written as yet, as I have been quite busy ... but I will get back to you ... Daniel
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AND there is a beautiful sunrise. BEhind the tree glowing golden pink Annie
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I like Allens poem too Annie
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It's just gone 12:15 on this side of the globe ... I have really missed the pages ... the completed poems needs some re-engineering to allow viewing material per day or period. We've almost hit the 3k mark and no changes as yet. pen and I have both requested some changes, but alas, to no avail. We have nought. The commentary section to the web master should rather be called the "poets wailing wall":) Daniel
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This poem serves to confirm my opinion of Allan's work. Denmark can be proud of her son... Daniel
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good morning Annie - good day Daniel, and thanks for your kind words on my blind words - the life of the poem is in the eye of the beholder (too, at least). Good to have you back in poetry land Daniel, small step for mankind - yet can be a giant step for man at times -- allan (long time since the greasing of the axle, hope the wagoon's still rolling)
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Thanks allan, ... axle is well greased, transaxle is able to roll ... but the pony refuses to have any of it:) ... Daniel
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Good morning Daniel 0630 here..I have missed you.welcome Home.......jake
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Greetings jake, now almost 13:50 ... I have missed this mansion of minds, heart's happy home ... Must sign off here... Will be working tomorrow, need to spend some time with the family ... Daniel
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