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Poem Number 2362
One kiss, well placed, upon thy lips
Will spark your reflex, - one hand on my hips
One hand in my hair, my neck, my shoulder
Will remind me of that mystery
one apple in eve's willing hand
now we are so afraid of that erotic fruit
come on and take a bite, suck the juice
that fruit was never the sin
and our fruit, plush and sweet
no less tender evidence of the natural state
Commentary:
a marvel, we never grow tired af that apple, do we ? - allan :)
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a marvel, we never grow tired af that apple, do we ? - allan :)
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Thank goodness or it would be the end of the species!:)))
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precicely, we never grow tired of that end of the species ... allan
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Smart mouth!!:)))))
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red & juicy like the apple, - back where we started, like i said... etc - allan :)
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allan, vacation has been very good, I see:)))) -pen (hi! btw...just got on the pages)
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right penny, think some work will cool me down in due time :( just beginning to enjoy my creative capabilities - allan
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yes, welcome back... you have been missed, (but we are not out of pies)
see your creative juices are flowing...have another apple ? lar
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tanks pen & lar - guess all good things in life gets taboo'd, sooner or later, a way to monopolize for the few or to dictate : "thou shall not have it, when i can not !" - so narrow narrow minded. Well keep shout it from the mountain ! love is good, so go practice, MAKE IT, DO, YOU, NOW !!! - allan (well, maybe have a cup of coffee first, that's what im gonna do - NOW. Nice day to all)
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thank you allan, for seeing the intent of my portion of this poem:) -pen
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