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Poem Number 23301
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the man and winter.
Commentary:
man.
the wind
is cold.
winter.
the wind
is meant to be cold.
man.
the clouds
are so gray.
winter.
the clouds
are meant to
bring grayness.
man.
the rain
is biting.
winter.
the rain
is meant to bite.
man.
i have no coat.
winter.
neither do i.
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Well done! I especially like the twist at the end! JFC
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wow. like this one a lot, kaleb. *grace
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Nice punchline in the end!!! Drm
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I hope someday to see a sky with no clouds and only silver linings ... it may be a while though ;)
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