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Poem Number 23300
The request
I like the big holy doggeral of trees
Commentary:
Upon an extraordinary request from a playful fairy
I must now answer a fantasy conceived in perfection,
a magical reality instinctive to warm summer dreams
an appointment with your emotions and imagination.
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As the playful breeze softly caressed leafs and flowers,
It sweetly whispered echoes of a forgotten, beautiful song,
Accompanied by the impetuously smooth, magically beautiful
tenuous light of perfumed candles, from times long gone.
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There is never a sweet night without prohibited kisses
We rapidly became two bonfires with a single heat
Learning a secret to be revealed only in eternal bliss
love has only owner, two hearts and a single beat.
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love has only one owner = last line
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Enjoyed reading this---good flow and rhyme structure! JFC
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Beautiful!!! Love the last stanza .... Drm
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This brings back memories
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