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Poem Number 23299
Lost souls


Commentary:
Banished from heaven, they roam,
to remember their dark, lost lives
forever sorry, winged demons,
full of empty lust and pride.
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Just like Shamjazi and Azael,
corrupt and heavenly at once
lost souls roam among the living,
their existance a painful dance.
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For them, the Eden is prohibited,
hell opens wide, a fiery burning cave,
hope falling, spirits toasted and inert,
their essence will never be saved.
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Their pride remains an Unforgiven sin,
Satan laughs wildly among white flames,
they are not capable of repentance
the only thing left for them is shame
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Broken wings, feathers float, souls die
but there is light among total darkness,
it says "Touch me and stay with me",
the one living force with eternal kindness.
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It attracts and collects fallen feathers,
copious rain starts on the infinite fire.
Silence among the former tormented souls,
as they let go of their earthy desires.
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Love prevails against overwhelming odds,
there is never an eternal condeming deed,
as we realise that hell is inside our mind,
expel resentment, greed and envy to be free.
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Hermestri
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Hi, Hermestri! It's been awhile!! I do like this--I like the emotion and the imagery--Well done!! ---JFC
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Nice Hermestry- What is superposition?
Top ~Cooker
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"The principle of superposition claims that while we do not know what the state of any object is, it is actually in all possible states simultaneously, as long as we don't look to check." What does it have to do with the poem?
Curious
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