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Poem Number 23297
devil dawn
Commentary:
devil dawn,
also rise,
like my undead shame
given name.
shine down that too white light.
show me.
devil dawn
sparkle on my shiny
transgressions
alliterate and lesson,
lesson,
lessen.
shouting devil,
gleaming fount,
illuminate the insect.
...
p.m.davis
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devil dawn,
also rise,
like my undead shame
given name.
shine down that too white light.
show me.
devil dawn
sparkle on my shiny
transgressions
alliterate and lesson,
lesson,
lessen.
shouting devil,
gleaming fount,
illuminate the insect
nature we inherent
...
p.m.davis
-------
I've had to read this a couple of times--but, I like it--good use of imagery and metaphor--the there is a feeling of remorse and despair that comes through--JFC
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