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Poem Number 23275
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Commentary:
Moments
left to cry
on the shoulders of
Time
as i watched from the side
a shadow
a witness ....
.... a witness of innocence
bloom into individual minds
able to laugh, scream & wrap their little arms around youth
.... a witness to strangers
painted with tears & heartbreak
drug use & abuse, lost ... lost in their their own hole-laden shoes
.... a witness of the moon & sun
leaving their daily blushes & shades
an ever-changing canvas, a reminder -- "tomorrow, it'll be okay"
.... a witness to global metamorphosis
her face .... aging, eroding
like hormonal movements with heat & cold -- "she's alive!"
i ...
i find myself
in awe
humbled
with such reminders all around
me
... what would
Time
do
without us
to spend it?

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excellent DRM. i particularly like the question posed. *grace
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Great work Drm! aka Daniel aka "psichore" How are you? I was browsing some of the cinquains we wrote almost 12 years ago that are still on this site. I was hoping to find pen, jake, allan, clare or mark again -- hoping to meet up on Facebook.
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hello there, Daniel! i remember you. from time to time, i go back to the old stuff from time to time, hoping to catch that "old wind". i used to correspond with jake via e-mail but that was ages ago. i'm on facebook. e-mail me: drmchazers@aol.com. i'd like to be connected with everyone. grace -- thanks!!! =o)) ... Drm
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