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Poem Number 23270
*The Experience*
Commentary:
I can feel it.
The changes..
taking me over
with ferocious
subtlety.
~
Suddenly..
everything
is more vibrant,
more detailed
as if waking
from a state
of dream.
~
Concience..
Speaking to me
now with
energetic tongue
in language
only I
can understand.
Causing
flickering flame
to grow to raging fire,
emotion.
~
Aknowlegement..
that the loudest
sound I could ever
hear is the voice
from inside of
my own heart,
and the deepest
silence one
could know
is the times
when said
voice quells.
~
Remembrance..
tears that fell
on my behalf,
promises unfulfilled,
fears that were
met with shaken knee,
leaving both scar
and unhealed wound.
~
Realization..
After leaves
have fallen,
and withered,
the trees themselves
do not falter,
but wait in lonely
silence for
the spring
to come back round.
That it is not
the leaves
that make the tree
beautiful,
but the symbiotic
relationship
held between them both.
~
Inspiration..
to go forth
with new
points of view,
and a feeling
of rebirth.
Second chances.
~
My..
How I have grown.
~Silhouette
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My first piece since a very long hiatus...all comments welcome. ~Silhouette
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i remember that particular silhouette..~Shilouette, good poem. i like second chances...i've been gone for a bit too.
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Ahh, So tell me mysterious one...who are you? I'd like to see a few old friends. ;)
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it's jerry. it's been awhile, and i forget to sign things! everywhere is so automated these days....good to see you
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Good to see you as well, old friend. *grace...)Kaleb, Csmith, any of you still here?
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I am here, although i've been gone awhile as well, good to see a few still posting.
)Kaleb
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it's good to see you back, sil. well-written. *grace
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I agree! Good poem, well written, good use of language. JFC
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