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Poem Number 23257
A map of ancient Alexandria
---chandler
folded into an oragami cherry blossom
---chandler
sits beside
---Anonymous
an empty bottle of Yebisu
---Anonymous
and a tea bowl by Nishihata
---Anonymous
outside is noise
---Anonymous
inside is silence
---Anonymous
surely we start to destroy each other
---Anonymous
diffused splendor of civilization
---Cooker, Moscow, Idaho
wrapped in the sophistry of love
---Cooker, Moscow, Idaho
You were patient, God knows
---Jake
bending in all the percise places
---jake
while the giant thumb nail
---Jake
pressed down against your folds
---Jake
And I watched, said nothing
---Jake
Now, too late,I take up my old bamboo wisk
---Jake
and try to bring centuries of foam for your cup
---Jake
but you, like the hanging gardens
---Jake
have been left too long unattended
---Jake
Commentary:
Thanks for the awesome conclusion! --Chandler
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I hope that's not formulaic ~Cooker
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I'm the first anon Chandler. I hope you like this bit as well. Nice to see you after all these years.. Jake
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hey, Jake!!!!! Great to see you still check out this place =o) how are things?? Chandler, Cooker .... hello to the both of you too ... =o) Wonderful "to see" familiar "faces" .... Drm
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