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Poem Number 23218
the shore is coming closer, the water
is moving faster, each wave reaching
pulling, drawing the sand back into the sea
brown veins flowing out into the green
Commentary:
oh! i love the migration of the comma!
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Punctuation poets. Keep your eyes on the ever changing winds of the punctuation mark. lol
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