our love is at the point where
you call me inconsiderate
for eating crackers off your schedule.
i say nothing when you leave
your clothes unfolded.
what kind of world is this?
i fixed our roof this summer- a love letter.
you let the pipes in the shower erode
and hot water runs all day.

corrode instead of erode?

-------
Oh, this is just too wonderful. A commentary on marriage or living together. It has taken me so long to realize that a good marriage is built on rusty pipes and crackers in bed. Keep posting. And let us know who you are. sg
-------
thank you for your kind words. if you go to "show authors" at the top of the page, you can see that i've signed each line. i'll try to keep posting and i hope to see more from you as well:)
--chandler
-------
thank you Chandler. The desire to see more work is mutual.
sg