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Poem Number 23157
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the sunrsie, the sunrise, the sunrise (breakfast thoughts)
Commentary:
the beginning is like juice swallowed quick,
sparkling burning and slipping down, but up,
leaving a dry tongue but wet eyes to see the fight against the fog
for
the
morning,
the beginning is like juice swallowed quick,
sharp and sharp and sharp. exponential. growing
hot and dripping drenching driving
the frost
from
the
grass,
the beginning is like juice swallowed quick,
squeezed pressed and poured, pulp free,
over
everything.
)Kaleb
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You still got it old boy. It seems you really like the word "dripping" and it's many forms, eh? Please keep writing. -Your #1 Fan (always and for everything)
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