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Poem Number 23143
Are the hills alive?
---chandler
The hills grow with time
---Claude, m
Pushed up by tectonic plates
---c, m
Meantime it comes alive with
---c, m
With flowers, birds and bees
---c, m
As thousands of generations of us
---claude, m
Are born, grow old and die away
---c, m
Then those hills wither in the weather
---c, m
As thousands more human generations
---c, m
Nourish, flourish then perish
---c, m
On these same hills destined to vanish
---claude, m
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---c, m
Next time you seek your breath
---Anonymous
Commentary:
wow . . . thanks for adding on to this! the first line has been echoing in my head for weeks, but i couldn't find the words to follow. this is lovely. -chandler
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Thank you Chandler. Before pirating your title, I was wondering what you had in mind. Claude
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