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Poem Number 23142
incompleteness
---Anonymous


Commentary:
The rain
falls
all day.

Low pressure systems
conspire with
the earth

Atoms,
molecules,
reunited.

Here I am,
desperately
seeking --

the calm
union
of atoms.

The weak
nuclear force --
electrons

finding
their way
home.

Here I lie,
quiet,
*yearning*.

The quintessential
neutrino.
Undetectable.

I close my eyes.
The patterns swirl,
in the reddish blackness.

I feel the air,
imperceptibly heave
a message. Inaudible.

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