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Poem Number 23130
If clouds had conversations
they'd speak before they break
No waterboard can frighten clouds
ttheir mechanism is not frail
They dance among the sunbeams
but also dance with hail.
Clouds can be so Schizophrenic
white fluff, puffing with delight,
but then with sudden mood change,
blush with anger, cheeks as black as night.
And I am like a cloud
floating out of control
my tears like pouring rain
my thoughts bordering insane
If heart-breakers had conversations
they'd speak before they break


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and shake, quake and complain
my shadow is a cloud of rain.

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Wet thing, sodden best things
wet before they dry, soaked
out dark shroud. never enough
when bobby dylan is around.
He'll take what you've got
and prairie wind the lot.
stop. and that's well before
young neil comes out and
sings our blues for free.

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