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Poem Number 23129
Totaltrublemakeher


Commentary:
Psychic fruitcake, living in bad taste.
Come back to us.
Supple madman, subtle as a man can
be with us
Strong ox weakling, mentally preaching
love to us.
Total troublemaker, you moonlit waster
Come and waste with us.
Total troublemaker, you moonlit waster
Come and waste with us.
Settled sadcase, sad face and briefcase.
Hurry up, it's gone.
Shaking tree trunk, breaking amongst
all that is wrong.
Headf**k buddies, smoking all the money
like cheech and chong.
Total troublemaker, you moonlit waster
Come and waste with us.
Total troublemaker, you moonlit waster
Come and waste with us.
Righteous leader, political achiever.
Shut up, you're wrong.
Empire builder; please don't kill us.
We don't have long.
Psychic believer, you pick and mix teaser.
You don't belong.
Total troublemaker, you moonlit waster
Come and waste with us.
Total troublemaker, you moonlit waster
Come and waste with us.

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I hope this is finished. The reason being that lyrically this is outstanding. This should be a song. Mike C.

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I agree! Amazing, beautiful, well done! Luved it entirely!
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I have to admit I can not read this. I can not read this, have tried several times. These are lyrics not a poem, and there is no music....
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This is a song. :) Well done.
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what are lyrics, but poetry set to music? i like it. *grace
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Really enjoyed this Mat - i particularly liked the half rhymes throughout this piece.
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