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Poem Number 23125
Sweet butterfly with wings of gold
You have set my heart ablaze
Our fire grows on every second
Your heart beats in distant rythms
I am captivated by the kindness of your eyes
the warmth of our bodies together at sunrise
Your my sunshine always on my mind
As we fly together threw this stand still time
Your kisses the taste of honey
I love having you in my life
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Commentary:
This poem is dedicated to Nikki~~~~~~~~eyewidopen
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you're not your, through not threw. wide not wid?
sweet poem.
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eyeswideopen@aol.com was taken a long time ago, so I had to settle for eyewidopen. The rest of the grammatical errors I will except. So you may put away your red grading pen.
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If your paying attention and I know you are!
I mean accept lol
eyewidopen
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it's too bad you're limited to using an aol name (and thus forced to misspell your identity). perhaps you could open a gmail account?
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