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Poem Number 23121
Life without shoes
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Commentary:
We could spend our whole lives in shoes,
never feeling the ground beneath us.
But with bravery, naked-feet explore
terrains we've treaded a thousand times
but not yet noticed.
Suddenly we experience the paths for what they really are,
what they've always been:
hard and soft
cold and warm
smooth and rough,
safe or dangerous.
We are feeling what has been there all along--
real earth and cement--
previously undiscovered,
hid until now under thin soles
of plastic, rubber or leather.
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-obscured
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