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Poem Number 23096
our beauty is


Commentary:
to be awake
restless as friday traffic heading towards the weekend,
and sad as an office repeating itself
under the same light.
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we're stuck in life
and not in birth or death.
this numbness needed to survive
can overkill and we
become irrational,
as disagreement is to war.
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numbness that stretches over us
as all the lands we've never been
and barley comprehend.

to say you've been there
is an inability
to comprehend vastness,
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to say you've been there
is to capture and cage.
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to be captured and caged
in vastness.
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if this is so then beauty too is an end
before a beginning.
but beauty cares for neither of the two.
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our beauty is birds finding glass
instead of the sky.
beauty we understand,
understand with our hearts.
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to care little for the window,
we thank them
as we do any attempt of freedom.
`
they fall broken,
as we fall human,
but it is wrong to say
it is the only hope we know.
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that would be to say they were caged to begin with.
`
raul
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