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Poem Number 23092
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---jerry
Commentary:
I. Cameras
a. these pictures that clog the eye
sentences that burn the sky,
verbs wiggle underneath the skin,
this puzzle box you have me in.
II. Pillow Talk
a. succumb to sleep on a bed of nails,
got this gun in case all else fails.
b. (drawing a blank)
III. Breathing
a. electric yellow sundown
behind a purple paper patchwork,
gleaming, oozing at pink seams.
09/21/07
-jerry
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a. electric yellow sundown
behind a purple paper patchwork,
gleaming, oozing at pink seams.
that's really strong jerry. like a punch.
raul
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This poem is awesome! It also reminds me of a poetic vision of maybe a scrapbook page.
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II. makes me think of pneumatic staplers
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