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Poem Number 23084
As when willows weave the waters
Shallow as their own reflection
Spontaneous as an unspoken thought
So are the days of our lives.
Montanna placed that odd diection
And caught ol' "Sticky Buns" dereliction
And ruined the invitation to drink the distilled reality buried neath the sodden roots
Commentary:
what's the next line ? able to leap tall building in a single bound
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Should be:
Montanna placed that odd direction.
When they make changes some hacks forget how to write from distraction, Sorry ~Cooker
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