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Poem Number 23073
The Tale of Gary Dean
---Jesse
Commentary:
Gary is sleeping,
slouched, in a hard wooden chair
at the lone table.
Restlessly weary
and unconsciously dreary,
snores silence mundane.
It amazes me
how this weathered man can fall
asleep anywhere.
He awoke to a
watery Manhattan and
the sound of static.
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I remember this one, and i like it. Line breaks might make it a bit more readable, but they might take away from it too. try them out and see what you think maybe. The end is mouth wateringly good. )K
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