i whisper, my voice as low as limbo,
---chandler
but you hear me. every part of me, my
---chandler
ligaments and tendons twanging, instruments
---chandler
of a nervous orchestra. i don't know
---chandler
how you hear me. every part of me, my
---chandler
broken prayers, unbeliever's covenants
---chandler
of flesh and rushing blood and bloody show
---chandler
giving birth to you. every part of you, my
---chandler
tiny baby, apple of my eye. do angels
---chandler
have to earn their harps before they join the show?
---chandler
i whisper, my voice as low as limbo,
---chandler
you hear me contracting and contracting
---chandler
who
---chandler
who
---chandler
he.
---chandler

i like this. i like this a lot. the synaesthesia in this is very enjoyable.
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great first line got my attention and i wasn't let down as i kept reading. "tendons twanging" is very cool .
)Kaleb

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lines 3 and 4 (from bottom) are great. Merkel