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Poem Number 23020
Garbage In, Garbage Out.
Commentary:
Is it that god is a retard?
Or can it be that he just don't get me hard?
Float my boat or trigger a fiction that goes
beyond affliction and restriction?
Religion is a sack of sanctions, imposed by
those who scrawl factions over passion.
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I know I see therefore it must be real
but how do you believe in what cannot be
until time stops and love = evil?
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If Mary was a virgin, then I can
stop the world from turning!
Shallow Luke and his Gospel - nose picking
pictures from existing scriptures.
An unoriginal religion - completed
by a cynical vision.
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I know I see therefore it must be real
but how do you believe in what cannot be
until bombs drop and love = evil?
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Hi. I haven't written or contributed to this site for 3 years and I know the above is rusty. I would appreciate any advice. Many thanks. Mat.
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Great imagery. First stanza has good effective rhymes. It's great to hear from you again, Mat = Ben
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YOU'RE DISGUSTING
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disgusting is believing in a non entity.
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