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Poem Number 23010
My eyes open to reveal
Last night was caught in shadows
Her smile hides only pain
The only thing genuine ,was her quick goodbye
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The distance fades my memory
I breath in everything from the depth of me
Her essence flows from shallows to the deep
Her footprints fade away, in the miles of sand
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Commentary:
Nice glimpse into loss. It seems to me a man in love with a woman, that is already involved, and he can not be with her. Sad and thought provoking))))))))Peacefrog
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